Mrs Abrahamson23 January 2014 04:21
''it's bit restrictive to say A-Level and Unit students; you could alienate some readers. i do appreciate you want it 'high-end', not 'trashy' though. ''
With Mrs Abrahamsons feedback on my pitch, I need too fully understand the concept of my pitch and how it need to be portrayed in order for it too be able too sell my product. I need too make it less restrictive and have words that will sell my product too my intended market buy fully connoting too them what my magazine may contain and what it is all about.
