Alterations part 3

As a part of my alterations due to my feedback, I found that in order to strictly follow the conventions of a magazine, I would need to include four images throughout. Therefore, I decided to include an image of myself onto my double page spread too connote to the audience who the interviewer was throughout my double page spread article. This creates recognition for the reader duet them knowing who wrote the article and recognising them by their image and also the image conforms to the original conventions used by magazines.  

Targets for this week

My targets for this week are too sort out my double page spread and make the arrangement clear and concise. I also need too have/sort out and alter the current images that i have for my contents and double page. 

Alterations part 2

 

With my contents page, due too the comments from my mentors i have altered my contents page in order too act upon the comments given. I have made the font smaller in order too make the contents page appear more realistic and allow it all too fit on as well. I have also added filled in, block faded rectangles over the main titles in order too make them stand out more.

Magazine alterations due too feedback

Due too one of my media teachers finding my main image on the front cover of my magazine draft appearing too look 'startled' even though originally aimed for a 'provocative' feel too it, I decided too choose another image that appeared more provocative and inviting due too the facial expression and body language. 
I also made the issue number and price smaller as well in order for it to look more proffessional.

Feedback for magazine draft

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